Fix typos and consistency issues across all presentation files

Torey Heinz committed Feb 23, 2026

commit b38751f79b5530d7c1123c2c52de07a9ce1ba279

02-the-language.livemd +2 -2

@@	@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ IO.puts("Got: #{result}")
	That's not a bug — it's a feature. If you expect `:ok` and get `:error`,
	Elixir tells you immediately instead of silently continuing with bad data.

-	JavaScript: Simalar to destructuring — but it also
+	JavaScript: Similar to destructuring — but it also
	validates the shape of your data at the same time.

	## Pattern Matching: Function Heads
@@	@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ what case it handles.

	## Pattern Matching: The `with` Statement

-	Real-world code often has multiple steps that can each fail. In other langauges there's an Interactor pattern that often requires a whole library to implement. Elixir has the built in `with` Statement
+	Real-world code often has multiple steps that can each fail. In other languages there's an Interactor pattern that often requires a whole library to implement. Elixir has the built-in `with` statement

	```elixir
	defmodule OrderProcessor do

scratch.md +6 -3

@@	@@ -179,9 +179,6 @@ Drop:
	Let's rethink the "wrap-up" it should

	- Rewrite "What we covered" based on the current slides.
-	- slides/01-intro.html
-	- 02-the-language.livemd
-	- 03-real-world.livemd

	- Highlight all the awesome things Elixir provides: This may take multiple slides
	- Supervision, GenServer, pattern matching, with chains, concurrency, LiveView.
@@	@@ -191,3 +188,9 @@ Let's rethink the "wrap-up" it should
	Real-time features come for free

	- These aren't separate tools bolted together. They're all built into the language and framework.
+
+	Okay, let's finalize the presentation.
+	Review each of these files for typos and consistency. Are we building a case for Elixir in a way that web developers will understand?
+	- slides/01-intro.html
+	- 02-the-language.livemd
+	- slides/03-real-world.html

slides/01-intro.html +1 -1

@@	@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
	<ol>
	<li class="fragment"><strong>Why Elixir?</strong> — Where it comes from and why it matters</li>
	<li class="fragment"><strong>The Language</strong> — Pattern matching, processes, and LiveView <em>(live demos!)</em></li>
-	<li class="fragment"><strong>Real-World Code</strong> — Production systems from at Vianet</li>
+	<li class="fragment"><strong>Real-World Code</strong> — Production systems at Vianet</li>
	</ol>
	<p class="fragment muted" style="margin-top: 1em;">Then we'll open it up for Q&A.</p>

slides/03-real-world.html +5 -8

@@	@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
	<p>500,000+ personalized emails through AWS SES</p>

	<aside class="notes">
-	First system: our email marketing platform. This sends half a million personalized emails through
+	First system: our email marketing platform. This sends half a million personalized emails through AWS SES. The challenge isn't just volume — it's doing it reliably without exceeding rate limits.
	</aside>
	</section>

@@	@@ -98,10 +98,10 @@ defmodule Marketing.CampaignSchedulerWorker do
	@chunk_size 2_000

	def perform(%Oban.Job{args: args}) do
-	member_ids = Campaigns.member_ids(args["campaign_id"])
+	campaign = Campaigns.get_campaign!(args["campaign_id"])

	Repo.transaction(fn ->
-	Repo.stream(member_ids(campaign), max_rows: @chunk_size)
+	Repo.stream(Campaigns.member_ids_query(campaign), max_rows: @chunk_size)
	\|> Stream.chunk_every(@chunk_size)
	\|> Enum.each(&schedule_batch(&1, campaign))
	end, timeout: :infinity)
@@	@@ -296,7 +296,7 @@ end
	</ul>
	<p class="fragment" style="font-size: 0.8em; margin-top: 0.8em; color: #555;">
	These services took <strong>years</strong> to build originally.<br/>
-	<span class="fragment">With <strong>Elixir</strong> + Claude Code,<br> we replaced them all in <strong>under six months</strong>.</span>
+	<span class="fragment">With <strong>Elixir</strong> + Claude Code,<br> we replaced them all in <strong>under six months</strong>.</span>
	</p>

	<aside class="notes">
@@	@@ -389,12 +389,9 @@ def mount(params, _session, socket) do
	end
	</code></pre>

-	<!-- <p class="fragment" style="font-size: 0.7em; color: #555;">
-	<code>assign_async</code> loads admin lists from 3 databases <strong>concurrently</strong> — loading states come for free.
-	</p> -->

	<aside class="notes">
-	Here's a real LiveView form. It loads data from three different databases asynchronously using assign_async. The loading states are automatic. Pattern matching determines if we're creating or editing. The form submission is just an Elixir function, not a REST endpoint.
+	Here's a real LiveView mount function. It loads admin lists from three different databases asynchronously using assign_async. All three queries run concurrently, and loading states are automatic — the template gets spinners for free while data loads.
	</aside>
	</section>